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阿伯丁大学是英国20所明星级大学之一,位于风景优美的苏格兰东岸,该校成立于1495年,500多年历史,是英国最古老的六所大学之一,曾有四位研究员获得诺贝尔奖,包括胰岛素的发明者。该校有一万一千多名学生,其中16%是研究生,14%来自世界一百三十多个国家和地区。有800多名教师。现任校长卫亦信(Wilson)爵士是1987-1992年的香港总督。老总督对中国人深有感情。欢迎中国人去阿伯丁大学,并可得到许多优惠照顾。也欢迎奖学金申请者。 (中文内容来自http://www.bjbys.net.cn/newssystem/news/hwyx/9313.html)

费用及奖学金:
学费:
(文科类)£6,480,(理科类)£8,580,(医学类)£15,720,(学年英语)3,320英镑
奖学金:
到位资金£237,930,申请成功率81%,平均奖助£400
来自中国和香港的所有学生(除了通过代理来我校学习的学生)都有资格享受减免第一年学费的10%的优惠。
入学要求:
IELTS最低分数:6.0
TOEFL最低分数:550
入学时间:
(冬季)9月21日,(春季)1月10日,(夏季)4月17日
住宿服务:
学校确保海外学生校内住宿,自炊型住宿仅45英镑每周,所有学生住宿均在步行范围之内
自炊式学生公寓: 40--60英镑/周
包餐式学生宿舍: 85--95英镑/周
私人公寓(与其他学生合租):30--88英镑/周
联络方式:
* 地址:University of Aberdeen Regent Walk, Aberdeen AB9 1FX
* 电话: +44 (0)1224-272014 传真: +44 (0)1224-272086
* E-mail地址:intoff@admin.abdn.ac.uk / admoff@admin.abdn.ac.uk
* Web 地址:http://www.abdn.ac.uk/

下面为该校对ps的写作要求,原文网址:http://www.abdn.ac.uk/sras/interviews/interviews1.shtml

How important is the personal statement?
The personal statement is important mostly when the decision is very borderline. If somebody's grades are low, then the personal statement will give us some clues about whether they are suited to academic study.

ps可以帮助你解释为何一些课程成绩较低。

What kind of information should I include in my personal statement?
I want to see that you have the ability to cope with things that are challenging. I want to see that you are willing to face obstacles, and confront difficulty. It has to show me that you are serious about studying. Even if your grades are low, we can give you the support you need to achieve, but we need to see that you are serious. Work experience or voluntary work is good to hear about, especially if it is challenging
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希望看到你有应对挑战的能力。你对学习的态度是严肃认真的。工作经历以及志愿工作可以写出来。